After gaining some feedback from the viewing and peer assessment of our first draft we were able to evaluate and plan the next steps we need to complete and the various features we need to update for our second draft in a few weeks time. The overall feedback was good and the grades given by our peers ranged from a D to a B. They were particular impressed by the quick cuts throughout the video which helped create a nice flow as they cut on the beat as appropriate. The mise-en-scene was also commented on as it was very conventional of a drum & bass video.
From our feedback we have decided to reshoot and update various aspects of our music video so far:
- Remove Emily and her character from the video entirely as the narrative was not strong enough and more relevant shots could be put in those places
- Change the narrative to focus on the masked character rather than Emily
- Reshoot various shots mainly at the beginning as they were unnecessarily unsteady and shaky
- Remove some repeated/duplicate shots and update them with unique one
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| a few shots we plan to update or reshoot due to quality or relevance |
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